During those weeks I was working hard on that novel, driven by the fire that only a really hot muse can light. Finally got to tell some of Gina Parton's story: how many ways the world can go crazy as a comet approaches. I charged through the climactic scenes and cruised into the epilogue on Monday, essentially completing the main plot line of the novel.
Now I will go back and add the subplot scenes to fill it out; most of those will be continuing and wrapping up the stories from THE DREAM LAND Book II "Dreams of Future's Past"--which ironically is the topic of this week's bloggerette.
Here's a summary of Book II for those of you who like the short versions. In THE DREAM LAND Book I "Long Distance Voyager" the final Act is a "mission" and Book II is no different. However, I must leave off the spoilers from this summary. Sorry.
It will be out for Kindle in June 2013.
THE
DREAM LAND
Book II : “Dreams of Future’s Past”
Synopsis
[The following complete synopsis originally had portions blacked out because the text contained "spoilers"; the black boxes have been removed now that the ebook is available.]
After his adventures in Book I, Sebastian
Talbot (a.k.a. Set-d’Elous, legendary warrior and Sekuatean cavalry regiment
captain) has exiled himself to a desolate island, content to laze away the days
and write his memoir. Until the emissary from Queen Tammy of Aivana arrives
with a mission he cannot refuse. Tammy, former IRS clerk who he took to
Ghoupallesz along with Michael in Book I, wants him to go fetch her son, Chuck
junior, who she left on Earth when she did not return but married the King of
Aivana. That king eventually died and she married Sebastian’s friend, the
mechanical wizard Jason.
Sebastian reluctantly returns to Earth and
coaxes Chucker (“Chuck R. Tucker”) back to Aivana where mother and son are
reunited. Mission accomplished. However, on the way back to his island he stops
in his favorite city, SelauĂȘ, and reminisces with a man who was his military
colleague during the wars. He realizes that he would change all of that period
in history if he could. He also regrets missing ten years with his Ghoupalle
wife, Zaura, when he returned to Earth for a brief visit that turned out to be
longer on Ghoupallesz. Zaura thought him dead and remarried; their brief
reunion was tragic even though they were able to reunite still later, thanks to
his fellow Interdimensional Voyager, Gina Parton, a.k.a. Jinetta, Queen of
Fenula.
Meanwhile, Sebastian awakens from a coma
in a hospital for the criminally insane and becomes the patient of Dr. Toni
Franck, psychiatrist. Evidently, he did not escape to Ghoupallesz at the end of
Book I but was shot by police. Now he is recovering; Dr. Franck comes to
believe his story of traveling to another world might be true rather than his
fantasy. The detective Chuck McElroy (ex-husband of Tammy, father of Chucker)
is investigating him, however, and befriends Dr. Franck to get information;
they date but he is not a gentleman and she tries to break it off with him.
Chuck pushes her against the desk and she gets a concussion, falls into a coma;
he releases Sebastian and urges him to escape just so he can pursue him and
kill the killer of his ex-wife Tammy (who is alive and well on
Ghoupallesz). Sebastian arrives at the
quarry where the interdimensional doorway exists and Chuck follows him through
the doorway.
Chuck finds himself in the Aivana desert
and when Sebastian tells him to retrace his steps and return to Earth, Chuck
takes it as a challenge. Sebastian walks off to begin a new life while Chuck eventually is captured by desert nomads and taken away to be sold into slavery.
Sebastian realizes his good fortune: he has returned to the ten years he missed
living with Zaura and pretends to be someone new; they marry and he rejoins the
regiment. Life is good, even though he will need to leave before his previous
self can return to resume life with her.
Sebastian as Set-d’Elous is sent with his
regiment to the northern district for autumn harvest patrol. There he meets a
youthful Basura-Kanoun who he knows will grow up to become leader of a rebel
group that eventually sparks revolution and becomes the new government of
Sekuate. He weighs the morality of killing one to save millions. He chooses;
along with that choice he must also vanish from his life with Zaura they have
had for eight years. He knows that what he has done is for the greater good.
His friend Jason does not agree. They argue and Set-d’Elous runs off to his
island once more to hide from the world.
Meanwhile, Chuck suffers at the hands of
his captors—until they understand that he “belongs” to Queen Tammy. They change
plans, wanting to get a reward for returning her slave. Then a storm kills all
but the youngest nomad, who mends his wounds. They become a team, making their
way to civilization, playing the role of slave and slave master when needed.
When they encounter a couple of bandits, Chuck comes alive and kills them to
save his new buddy, the young nomad who saved him earlier. Reaching
civilization but afraid to be seen by Tammy, Chuck and the nomad set up a
domestic partnership.
At the same time, Tammy’s son Chucker
learns the ways of Ghoupallesz from his new step-father Jason. They take a
Youth Trek, a custom for young men. Jason teaches Chucker yet their journey
turns to finding what happened to Michael Fenning, who had been involved with
Tammy before. Last they heard Michael had abandoned his treatment for
overdosing on the elixir of love moussalaganĂȘ and took off with his nurses,
then went on alone whoring and gambling and being a playboy across the
countries of Gotanka, the northern region of the continent of Zissekap.
Finally, they track Michael to a clinic for the terminally ill and Chucker
confronts Michael about what he did to Tammy.
Chucker, maturing beyond his years while
on Ghoupallesz, goes to Sebastian’s/Set’s island to get answers to his
questions. Set explains everything; then he leads Chucker back to Aivana
without ever crossing the sea, just by using the interdimensional doorways. In
Aivana, Chucker resumes his training to be a prince but Set discovers evidence
that what he did in killing Basura-Kanoun has had odd effects on history. The
war never happened but his own family suffered different, perhaps worse fate.
He and Chucker realize they must change what was changed before to correct the
mistake in history. Of course, Set cannot go do it himself—he can’t stop
himself—so someone else must take on the mission. They form a mercenary group
called History, Inc. and plan what to do.
Sebastian/Set begins having hallucinations
of wartime, only they do not exactly fit what he remembers. His team of
mercenaries goes through the right interdimensional doorways to arrive at the
correct time period to meet his previous self and stop him from killing
Basura-Kanoun. The mission goes wrong and a Plan B is initiated to correct the
mistaken mission to undo the first change!
Meanwhile, Dr. Franck awakens from her
coma and starts a new life with a son who was born while she was unconscious.
She maintains the father is her former patient Sebastian/Set. While Set is on
Earth to direct the latest mission of History, Inc., he discovers her story and
contacts her. They make plans to meet but the police are monitoring the calls
and plan to intercept him. He escaped from the criminal hospital, after all,
and he is still blamed for the deaths of his IRS co-workers as well as the attack
on Dr. Franck which she denies was him.
As the History team makes its move,
Sebastian/Set attends the Royal Audience in Aivana but leaves just as Chuck
arrives to reclaim Tammy and terrorists follow him in with bombs. The
explosions blast Tammy and Chuck back to Earth and Chucker also to somewhere
else. For Sebastian/Set, it seems to match the explosion of the propane tank at
the old, abandoned house he was going to meet Dr. Franck at. It was surrounded
by a SWAT team; Dr. Franck did not meet him and whether or not he escaped is
uncertain.
Sebastian/Set
awakens in bed with a woman in an elegant hotel room; he thinks he’s in Paris
on vacation with Dr. Toni Franck, reunited at last. But it turns out he is
someone of importance: a personal assistant comes to dress him and lead him
through his busy schedule. The woman in the bed is Basura-Kanoun, not Toni
Franck. Not wanting to alarm any of his handlers, he plays along, trying to
figure out how he ended up in this strange new scenario. Gathering enough information, it finally
dawns on him that he is the emperor—the Emperor of Sekuate! Not only did he not
prevent the wars, he became the emperor who initiated them. He tries to find a
way to escape before he must give a caustic speech to the assembled representative
at an international conference. Biding his time in a waiting room, his
entourage is attacked by a team of assassins: Sebastian/Set is shot and falls
through a window, down to the plaza below—except he does not hit the plaza
stones. He falls through time, back to that moment when he remeets the young
Basura-Kanoun and instead of killing her agrees to marry her...thus setting in
motion the timeline that we have just read.So...what if there was a war and then somebody changed something and there wasn't a war? Would those who lived through it still have memories? Would those people be called crazy?
You can get started on Book I "Long Distance Voyager"
here: THE DREAM LAND
THE DREAM LAND Book III "Diaspora"
will be available perhaps as soon as December 2013.
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quote: "So...what if there was a war and then somebody changed something and there wasn't a war? Would those who lived through it still have memories? Would those people be called crazy?"
ReplyDeleteI have myself pondered that conundrum many times, and I end up with a different answer each time.